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Re: Ban Gay Marriage
Well I'm not one who agrees or disagrees with this kind of marriage.But how could this be replied to on some information form: Mother's Name: Father's Name: Kind of embarrassing? ...
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Re: Myopia
Thanks.This was just the kind of case I expected to see. By the way....I am shortsighted too.Got them when I was 15.
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Re: Abortions
I'd like to put my point forward through the following: Contraception does not guarantee 100% chances of preventing pregnancy. If a couple is going through strenuous work periods in their ...
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Re: Who's Next?
This was something I saw for real. At a tournament of chess that I once played,I saw a deaf person playing who seemed to be an all smiles kind of ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: The User Below You ... [2]
Is correct. TPBM:Is a right hander.
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Some strange questions
1)Which side of your jaw do you chew on? 2)Can you write with both hands(ambidextrous),or..are you just plain lefty or righty? 3)Do you know anyone with photographic memory? 4)Have you ...
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Re: Writing tip needed
Does anyone know how to avoid forced rhyming because many people who reviewed my works have said I used too much forced rhyming. Also......I find it a big trouble to ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Myopia
This post mainly concerns anyone who is/was shortsighted(someone who has trouble seeing at distance).More specifically,to those who have acquired it naturally(i.e. non-genetically). Questions: Has you
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Soldier
Since people rarely write on such topics, I thought I should review this. head lolling hands bloody napalm-colored eyes These lines lack structure and flow.Rearrange them to get a rhythm. ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: One Last Time
This one looked liked it had come out straight from a funeral sight. All the emotions that surface after a person dies was brought out very accurately. This dreadful event ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Rain
Hi First and foremost....thanks for keeping the poem short and simple and easy to understand. About grammar.....run this through MS word and you should be ok. The spirit of the ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: What Do I Do?
This poem was written very well for a first shows that you have got the required talent for poetry. However, you must try to improvise on the flow of the ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: Fire
Hi I must say....great job done on keeping it short and effective. The imagery was really alive and the power of fire was shown like never before.I liked the magnificence ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: The White One
This was a pretty good one.Really simple with no "deep" meaning to understand. Very nice description of the jungle and the observations of the tigers.I guess this poem had something ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: happiness is a present
Quite insightful,yet feels a little incomplete. Stanza 1: Happiness is a present, Given to you by friends. Take it for granted, That’s when your friendship ends. Very well written lines ...
Jul 28, 2009
